Tuesday, October 19, 2021

Writing Task

 Today I got sent 2 task for my writing I had to pick a prompt of 6 pictures this is the picture is choose. 

Why do you say here is my respones ' I choose this picture to write because it fun bright and it just stood out to me and the shape of the cave above it is a nice sculpture '.

We had to write or reply why we did it the next thing we had to do is write 7 facts about the prompt I choose here is my 7 reason why.

1. A kid is swimming to the cove/cave .

2.The water is a lovely blue colour.

3.The kid is swimming 

4.There are rocks on the shoreline.

5.the shadow of the cove/cave is reflecting on top of the bottom but up of the cove/cave or cavern.

6.The sun is shining.

7.The moss on top of the top on the cove/cave has a real touch to it.


That was really hard to this is my next task to correct the wrong sentence .

Something’s wrong here:

  • Look at the sentences below and highlight the mistakes.

  • Rewrite the sentences so that they are correct- look for punctuation, grammar, and spelling mistakes. 


  1. i cant wait to go back to sckool

  2. WhEn i went waking doWn the road I saw lotS of dogs!

  3. help im stuck i cryed 

  4. its alive i screamed

  5. are u ok! I aksed



The next one was pretty easy just like the previous activity but sentence sturctuers.

Sick Sentences:

  • Rewrite the sentences below to make them better. 


  1. I went to go get something for the shops.

  2. I was dreaming all day.

  3. The ice cream was delicous.

  4. My sister hit me with a frezzing water ballon.



Then we had to make a recount of our hoilidays.

Recount - Holidays 


In the holidays I set a schedule for us to clean so we can get our devices so my scheled was :


Monday - Clean out the cupboards

Tuesday - KItchen 

Wednesday - Vaccines

Thursday - walls

Friday - Clean our rooms 

Saturday - gardens

Sunday - relax.


Here how the first week was 


Monday - Monday

Tuesday -  Kitchen & cupboards

Wednesday - vaccines

Thursday - Break

Friday- Usual ( breakfast vacuum )

Saturday - Bedrooms and gardens


This above is only the first week of the holidays

Second week

MOVIE NIGHT ALL Night + Game night

 you slept in the lounge room and we watch movie on Maya played charades and eat couple fruits I watch black panthers and take games on until the morning 


Then we had to make a responsible poster so I did this on Canva you can go to this sight to make poster so I did a eco friendly poster.



Thank you for reading if you read the whole thing if you did see you in my next blog probably P.E or Maths anyways goodbye😃.





1 comment:

  1. I love your responses to the picture. I think I would like to be the kid who is swimming in that crystal clear ocean. Do you always make schedules like you did in the holiday break?
    My daily schedule includes walking my dog twice a day.
    Your poster says it all! Do you wish we had a Planet B?

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